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Ruined Desert,Ruined me....
Walking by this road
All I see is
A great desert ,everything in ruins
After that sandstorm of harsh wind.
Earlier it might have been a garden,
Or a playground for children and bees.
But now is a desert in ruins....
Seems so similar to my life,
My angel came;gave me light
Sowed the seed of happiness and joy in me.
Made me feel special,
Made me feel like His creation.
Love was all I could see,
Could feel,
Could give to him.
But then the monsters came,
Disease ,sickness,all the bad you name!
Weaker grew my angel day by day.
But still he smiled bright like the sun does in a beautiful day of may
The smile gave me a few moments of hope.
Made me think I could cope.
But on the other day came,
The severe winter that I could not tame.
Didn't know it would be his last.
He called me,embraced me
Died in my arms,left me.
So today when I see the desert in ruins
I compare it with me.
So all I can say," Don't you worry my angel.
Tomorrow I will be with you in God's farm."
(So how is it? Let me know guys,pretty please!!)
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Comment by Diana Narcissa Malfoy on December 6, 2012 at 6:29pm -
I can't say anything but Wow Potter >w/p>
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Comment by PuNk PoTtEr on December 6, 2012 at 3:10am -
nice!!! i like it very much!
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Comment by Weasley Girl on December 5, 2012 at 11:36am -
Awesome dearest.. keep it up..
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Comment by Brandon The Storytraveler (CST) on December 5, 2012 at 10:57am -
Absolutely beautiful....<3 I love the imagery, and you truly grab at the heartstrings of the reader.
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Comment by ♥Skylar the Angel♥ on December 5, 2012 at 9:44am -
Its great! Great job! ^^
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Comment by Adri the Herondale Nargle [VIW] on December 5, 2012 at 9:39am -
A really good poem, Selina. The message is clear :)
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Comment by Evan Rosier [RP] on December 5, 2012 at 9:36am -
i love it
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