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Comment by Moka Shiko on November 16, 2012 at 12:24am

Should I keep going on that or should I show another story chap of another story?

Comment by Pound King on November 11, 2012 at 11:32pm

ahun!!

Comment by Moka Shiko on November 11, 2012 at 11:16pm

chapter 1                                                                                                                                                   I was walking through the night time by a wal mart when a group of men started walking toward her silently as she was walking to her car right when she got her keys out a man stepped in front of her as she walked in to him, he was a large and muscular man with brown eyes dark skin and a buzz cut... he laughed as he said "where you going? its dangerous to be out here at night." he laughed even louder as i walked by him not realizing the approaching group of men right as i made it to the car the man grabbed my waist and shoved me back, groceries spilling and a fall to the ground as the men caught up to me and grabbed me under each arm and hoisted me a good 2 feet above the cement and took me away from the safety of my car and into the hungry shadows