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For the sake of your love...
I had,
Crossed many roaring seas,
Fought many wars,
Cut many forests ,
Just to get home, to you.
I was glad to see your smile,
But was broken to see you with another.
Took her in your arms, you did.
While under the bushes I hid.
Never imagined you could break me so bad!
It was a horrible tragedy, the agony I felt.
Each day I saw you, my heart broke more.
Until the day I couldn't breathe,
Your smiling face tormented me.
So when I breathed my last
It was only the last of love.
Cut out my affections, threw them away.
Never to feel again.
Gone I was in a horse
So that one day you will beg for me
With remorse.
But you plunged a knife in my heart now
When you said,'Die, you destroyer!'
'You took away my love, you murderer!'
And all I say,'Ah, but my love,you were
My destroyer,
And today my Murderer....'
(Guys..is the story clear?I dunno if it is..If it's confusing please tell me!!!Pretty please!!!!!^_^)
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Comment by Brandon The Storytraveler (CST) on January 2, 2013 at 9:36am -
No, it's clear. :) It's great! Besides, obscurity adds to a poem; it leaves more to the reader's imagination.
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